windows of the soul
i’ve mastered my sight to see
now… to feel… and touch…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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In touch with oneself indeed. Nicely written Demar
Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from seeing to feeling to touching…it suggests that understanding isn’t a destination but an ever-deepening experience. There’s a quiet wisdom packed into these few words. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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