Pool comp

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Last night was the pool comp, I don't play as a rule: it's a social night for me, and, I don't care if I look like a fool.

 

I thought it wise to catch the train *in case I sink a few! 

Now as I walked from the station I met someone I never knew...

 

Standing near the stairs, handing out flyers, was a simple young man, wearing a smile: he said,

"Jesus loves you."

 I said,

 "I know"

  Well, his face lights up!

 And quick as a flash, said, "God bless you."

I said,

"Thank you"

 And that was that, off to the pub to shoot the crap!

Won my first game (and with it a schooner), had a few more (should have left sooner)

Anyway it was a good night, but the blessing on the step was my highlight...

 

"And without all contradiction the less is blessed of the better."

 

His eyes were soft;

I could read his face: 

The simpleton:

Full of love, and grace.

 

Six words, without delay: on the night; into the day...

 

The less is blessed by the greater: the greater is not on display. 

Entertaining angels?

I couldn't say.

 

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  • Paul Bell

    God sure works in mysterious ways, and the guy was only selling love, and free at that.
    Sometimes a simple gesture speaks volumes, as two people acknowledge the world together.

  • sorenbarrett

    A spiritual message in a poem of rhyme. Nicely done

  • peto

    Wonderful write
    And I love a game of pool

  • Doggerel Dave

    Straightforward tale simply told, and none the worse for that. Enjoyed the experience.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected conversation ends up becoming the part of the day I remember most. Your poem captures that beautifully…how grace often arrives quietly, without fanfare. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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