Threshold

Kaz

She entrusts her woes 

to the raven by the shore 

Upon obsidian wings,

he carries them afar 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Very nice wording

    • Kaz

      Thank you 😊

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Demar Desu

        Masterpiece

        • Kaz

          Thank you lots 💓

        • soheil khodaparasti

          Simple yet evocative imagery conveys the quiet hope of letting go and finding emotional release.



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