Happy tung tung tung sahur to you!
Happy birthday to you,
You may have aged but your love for tung tung tung sahur still pulls through.
I’m glad you enjoyed your pie and cake,
You’re lucky I wasn’t there,
for your sake,
As I would’ve eaten your entire plate.
And gained 67 pounds of weight.
You are 17 now,
So wise and free,
And yet you still smell like poo and pee.
Jk.
Maybe..
Now back to the poem,
The real nitty gritty.
You are my favourite brother,
As I only have one,
but also because I know I wouldn’t choose another.
Thank you for being a kind and silly boy,
Your love for tung tung tung sahur brings so much joy.
I hope you enjoy your special day,
as what makes it special,
is your presence on this earth, hooray!
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Author:
applecherry (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this for my brothers birthday. I wanted it to be silly but still show care. Happy birthday to my brother. Also this poem does rhyme, but it has to be said in a certain way. If anyone has any advice on how to make my rhyme clearer that would be helpful.
- Category: Humor
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Comments1
Nicely done a good write.
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