Notice of absence from A Dying Hero of the Past
if im not on,I'm probably on vacation....or at my best friends house.or playing with my cats
if im not on,I'm probably on vacation....or at my best friends house.or playing with my cats
I am a whisper
not a voice
I am a splash
not a wave
I am a seedling
not a tree
I am a spark
not a flame
I am pretty
not beautiful
I am the admirer
not the lover
I am a girl
not a woman
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Author:
Tokitou (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: for those who are still a child on the inside. (*^▽^*)
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 17
- Users favorite of this poem: A Dying Hero of the Past, sorenbarrett
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Comments1
I love this concept it is one of being who one is of evolution in the process and of accepting reality. It normalizes the state of whoever and whatever one is. Nicely done and a fave.
yes i enjoyed tackling the subject of how we tend to love the thought of being young even when we are old. but i like being a young person haha
Nicely done
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