The Fight

Fränz Müller

I take a breath

and shed my armor

revealing to you

my pulsing, throbbing heart

full of ages of pain

trauma and regret

the very things

that first forged that armor

which places that division

between me and you.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Nicely said armor once forged now removed a sign of trust. Nicely written Franz

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

    Yeah we put our armor down before those we trust. Awesome poem muse, well expressed! Kudos!!

    • Fränz Müller

      Thank you so much! If you would like to be friends on here, please send me a friend request. ☺️

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Wow, Fränz…this is raw in the best way. There’s pain here, but also courage in allowing yourself to be seen without all the protection between you and another person. That landed deeply with me. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Paul Bell

      Takes a lot of trust to unweld the armour.
      Onwards and upwards.

    • Demar Desu

      The skin.. wow beautiful poem



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