Forgive me?

Butter

Forgive me not 

for the dawn is all knowing.
I do not decide
what is worth forgoing.

Forgive me not, 

for the dawn is forthcoming,  
and I amount to nothing,  
for reality is all about overcoming-  
your deep pitted troubles
festering in an over flowing well. 

  • Author: Butter :3 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2026 06:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: Day 5 :3
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fränz Müller, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • Fränz Müller

    Excellent

  • sorenbarrett

    This one required some thought. Clever and nicely written

    • Butter

      :3 thanks yall

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space. There’s guilt, resignation, and a kind of exhausted searching for a way through what keeps festering underneath. It feels deeply human. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Butter

          bro you cooked with your comment
          Like THANK YOU.
          :3 yall make my day



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