You used to say "I love you"
While asleep in bed
I'd reply I did too
But it was only a dream in your head
You'd mumble sweet words
Underneath your snores
Little peeps like baby birds
Right outside our doors
I'd hold you tight just for a while
Hum and softly comb your hair
And you'd give a tiny smile
One we'd often share
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem ends a bit abruptly but I wasn’t sure what to add to it.
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Comments4
I think the ending is perfect as it is. A very sweet poem.
Why thank you Fränz, I’m glad you liked it
I did! You are very welcome. ☺️
A lovely love poem rhymed nicely sweet. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Thank you for commenting!
Tender and sweet and whether a lover or a small child it is all the same. Lovely
I appreciate your read and comment Soren, thank you!
You are most welcome
Wow, Allie…this is so gentle and intimate. There’s something deeply touching about affection showing itself when someone isn’t even fully awake…unguarded, instinctive, and completely human. Beautifully done, my friend. I agree with Fränz on this. The ending is perfect as is.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
That means a lot Tristan! Thank you for reading and commenting as always
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