You used to say "I love you"
While asleep in bed
I'd reply I did too
But it was only a dream in your head
You'd mumble sweet words
Underneath your snores
Little peeps like baby birds
Right outside our doors
I'd hold you tight just for a while
Hum and softly comb your hair
And you'd give a tiny smile
One we'd often share
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem ends a bit abruptly but I wasn’t sure what to add to it.
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Comments2
I think the ending is perfect as it is. A very sweet poem.
A lovely love poem rhymed nicely sweet. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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