A fathomless unobstructed beating rests-
Only those with a death wish look for It.
following that deafening bellow.
in a submarine-
or with what your lungs may allow.
you may find it
but at what cost?
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Author:
Butter :3 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Day 6 of reigniting my poetry flame. This is based off a short story I wrote and is basically a miniature version of what it entails. :3
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Comments2
There is a claustrophobic feel to this as submarine was mentioned and a fear of depths when breathing comes into the picture. Nicely done
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Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in the idea of pursuing what lies beyond ordinary reach, especially when the pursuit itself becomes the danger. Really strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
:3 thanks yall
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