and it was cloudy
sigh… it also rained a lot
I MUST understand…
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Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Nicely done Demar with a cutting word as well
I didn’t know how else to emphasize my desire
Did well my friend true haikus are supposed to have a cutting word or punctuation mark that makes the cut from the one view to the next.
Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something painfully human about blaming the wrong thing, realizing it, and still knowing the real lesson hasn’t quite settled in yet. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Then my job is done here. Thank you TRL
This one is relatable Demar, blaming one thing and then realizing that you might’ve been wrong. I like to think I don’t do that but I do, wonderful job
As always my gratitudes Allie
You’re very welcome Demar
A mix of haiku and senryu. Nicely done. We always strive to understand things, in reality it’s a mystery, I believe. A fave!
Thank you my friend… I’m not as traditional as other poets, still I’m glad you appreciated it
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