Intellectuals!
please you have to hear me out!
…ooo… pretty flower…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Intellectuals!
please you have to hear me out!
…ooo… pretty flower…
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Comments2
Is pretty flower the kigo? and the dots the kireji? a good read my friend.
Okay you’re getting to advanced for me Soren! I’m still counting on my fingers… it’s 3 lines right?
Dear Demar you are so correct it is three and you have the syllables correct as well just thought I would throw in a little advanced stuff now that your ready.
You praise me way to highly… I don’t think I’m ready but thank you Soren I really appreciate you
Not at all my friend. You are most welcome
The tickets on my train of thought are far too expensive 😁
Great one!
I’m a fate evader! What do you think? Can we make creative copyright a thing of the past?
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