Life

sorenbarrett

Peach blooms on a tree
Spring, with transformed majesty
Their fruit all can see

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  • soheil khodaparasti

    A beautiful portrayal of nature’s transformation in spring.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Soheil your words as always appreciated. It has been a long time since I did a haiku and the muse being weary handed this one out.

      • soheil khodaparasti

        You are welcome. It may have been a weary muse, but it seems she still had some magic left. Thank you for sharing it—it was lovely to read.

      • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

        Spring is sprung

      • antra.coree

        Beautiful

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much Antra for the read and kind comment it is appreciated.

        • Lorenz

          Flavor of the orchard of delights...

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Lorenz for your stopping by. Are you sure it is not the forbidden tree of knowledge of the angel guarded tree of life?

            • Lorenz

              The serpent is the poet's friend .

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Soren, this is simple and beautiful. There’s a quiet sense of renewal here...life revealing itself in stages, from blossom to something tangible and shared. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much Tristan for the review and kind words it is as always most appreciated

              • arqios

                So much of life in a tiny haiku 🙏🏻🕊️

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks Cryptic your words are always most appreciated

                  • arqios

                    Most welcome, my friend 🙏🏻🕊️

                  • Thomas W Case

                    This is a tiny, clean celebration of spring, with the peach bloom carrying the whole transformation from blossom to fruit. There’s a damn pleasing simplicity here—the poem doesn’t try to make the season more complicated than it is.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Thomas I appreciate your interpretation I needed something simple after a couple of years of daily writes

                    • Kevin Hulme

                      How so few words can Paint a Picture.
                      Nice one .

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you very much Kevin. Your kindness is most appreciated.

                        • Kevin Hulme

                          👍

                        • Paul Bell

                          Just as well we don't have peech trees here, they would be on fire.
                          Peeches are lovely though, they just melt in your mouth.

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks Paul appreciate the read and comment. Hope you are doing well and staying out of the fire.

                          • orchidee

                            Good write SB.

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks Orchi hope you are doing well.

                            • DLewis88

                              It's well written.

                            • cully45

                              Thanks Soren as usual your comments are much appreciated . regards Owen

                              • sorenbarrett

                                As are yours my friend



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