I.
I swallowed a question,
I felt it move like a second heartbeat.
It had teeth.
II.
I asked god why
we were made,
He pointed,
at the meat between my teeth.
I had forgotten I was eating myself.
III.
The horizon opens it’s mouth,
Birds mistake it for instruction,
Trees mistake it for permission,
We mistake it for hope.
IV.
We spend our lifes,
building mouths,
large enough to swallow the universe,
then die,
before tasting anything.
V.
Perhaps that’s what life is.
A wound inventing a reason,
to remain open.
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The Skeptic (Pseudonym) (
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Creative, this poem sees life as a wound open and raw. One can feel such wounds if suffering is our purpose. A thought provoking write.
There’s a damn unsettling intelligence running through this, especially the recurring imagery of mouths, teeth, hunger, and consumption. “I had forgotten I was eating myself” is viciously good, and the final line leaves the whole poem hanging open like the wound it describes.
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