POWDER MONKEY

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

The powder monkey
Lies dead on board
His fifteenth birthday
A silent chord
When battle ceases
They bury the dead
Collected fragments
Legs, arms and heads.

The cannons will rest
Metal to cool
Day to night
A weeping moon
To watch over
Bodies strewn
Mothers children
Dead too soon.

War is war
The Captains say
They will write a book
Make battle pay
While powder monkeys
Mothers pray
Alone at fireside
It is the way.

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  • sorenbarrett

    I know what they were and a sad image is created by this poem under a ironic name that evokes initial mirth. Well written my friend

  • Syd

    Hi Norman, such an awful life it must have been. Working as a powder monkey will have been a dangerous occupation. I live not far from Hartlepool whos people famously hung a (powder) monkey.

    - Syd 🍄

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      I actually live in Hartlepool, thanks for the read my friend always much appreciated

      • Syd

        It's a small world Norman. I was only there on Sunday, at the cinema with my son. I'm close to Peterlee.

        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

          Yes a small world, but I wouldnt like to paint it lol

        • orchidee

          Good write N.
          If we believe in evolution, there's monkeys too at that bus stop. Some have evolved into humans while waiting! lol.

          • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

            a natural progression over the centuries of waiting, bloody no 7 lol

            • orchidee

              Ohh, let's try a different route! Will the, e.g. No.4 or No.11 bus arrive? lol.

              • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                I only wanted to go into town lol

                • orchidee

                  You only wanted to call into town for a loaf of bread, as the saying goes?! lol.

                  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                    AS THE SAYING GOES LOL

                    • orchidee

                      Who said that - 'I only popped in for a loaf of bread'?
                      A corny joke appeared online: 'I'm on a roll with this bread!'

                      • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                        I am lacking carbs lol

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        What a devastating piece, Norman. The violence is immediate, but the deepest wound belongs to those left grieving while powerful men turn slaughter into legacy and profit. Sadly, humanity still has not learned. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

                          spot on comments my friend not much changes in war, thanking you for read its always much appreciated

                        • RSM0812

                          Brilliant write my friend



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