my dream

jim56

i had a lovely dream of place so far away 
where it was full of children and i watched them play 
all them were happy every girl and boy 
playing very happily sharing lots of joy

 
everything was peaceful in this world so bright 
a place that felt so safe where everything was right 
this was just a dream something i could see 
a place that was so safe the way the world should be.

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 19th, 2026 05:04
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  • sorenbarrett

    Dreams can be made reality Jim maybe not the whole world but your world. A lovely write

    • jim56

      hi thank you for always lovely comments
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Jim

      • RSM0812

        Great message. Good write. Enjoyed the read

        • jim56

          hi thanks for lovely comment jim



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