In the dark
Need a spark
Battling to break through
Mined in a fog
(Could be the grog?)
Thoughts turn to you
Of things said
Pages read
Brought out into the blue
Words soar high
Thunderbolts fly
Arrows pierce the heart
Straight and true
That's what you do
Bring a brand new start
Fruit so sweet
Words like meat
Nourishing every part
Head to toe
Spirit to soul
The breath of life within
Whispers: soft; mellow; let the games begin.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Bring it on is the message I get. Lovely and so well said in rhyme well placed and rhythm that appeals to the thought.
Not mystified about this at all....
Should be unambiguous to to whom it will (I hope) concern.
Smooth read. Thanks.
You have ni idea what joy that brings me.
Oh get away with yer!
What a warm and energizing piece, Valiantstar. It begins in struggle, then another person’s words arrive with clarity, strength, and nourishment…until the whole spirit feels ready to move again. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
:3 idk what it’s saying but I had fun reading it and to me that’s all that matters.
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