Unfinished Thoughts

A.N.

So many unfinished thoughts,
so many words unsaid.
So many feelings pushed away
for protection.

 

Understanding that sometimes
time is what you need.
Understanding that you don't have much time.

 

A thought.
A blink.
A breath.
A feeling of dread,
but relief.

 

When time
stops
and the mask fades.

 

What a feeling—
learning to grow.

Comments +

Comments6

  • not_defined

    Excellent poem, mate. I really enjoy your writing style

    • A.N.

      Thank you so much!

    • sorenbarrett

      A poem of time in a relationship and getting past the time to respond. Well done

      • A.N.

        Thank you!

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome

        • Fränz Müller

          I have more masks than Don Post 😁 Well done.

          • A.N.

            😂 I’ll take that as a compliment! Thank you!

            • Fränz Müller

              It is indeed! You’re welcome!

            • soheil khodaparasti

              Hauntingly beautiful. It captures the fragile moment when the mask finally fades and all that remains is the truth of what we have been carrying.

            • Demar Desu

              Masterpiece… the beauty of being a student

              • A.N.

                Thank you!!

              • NafisaSB

                agree with the sentiments expressed by you - well done

                • A.N.

                  Thank you!

                  • NafisaSB

                    you are most welcome



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