it’s okay when they do it, but it’s a problem when I do it

Demar Desu

and why not be rich! 

why not be wealthy as well! 

if God allows us…

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  • sorenbarrett

    A wish many have well written

    • Demar Desu

      Let’s play bingo Soren

      • sorenbarrett

        Never did well at that lets play five card draw

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Demar, what a compact and provocative piece. It exposes the selective morality surrounding prosperity while leaving ambition and divine permission in uneasy conversation. Three lines carrying one hell of a challenge, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • Rhan Sterling Henry

        Why not?



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