I hold you in thought Poem, by lorenz, at My poetic side

I hold you in thought as that star

which faded away in the winter night

I hold you in thought as a earth

that offered its fruit in the guilty bliss

of a fleeting moment of abandon...

we shared the forbidden as if it were

a new blood and delicious venom ...

I hold you in thought ,

like a kind of geometric pattern

imagined by a schizophrenic impressionist ,

Unfinished landscapes sketched on a canvas

haunted by Bohemian spirits .

Sometimes, I catch your gaze in a marble of flesh

who's daydreaming over a mug of dashed hopes .

I'd like to rush and say :

'' Do you remember the procession of lost illusions ? ''

And you're off again like a well-kept secret .

You had the colors of the clouds

that only a madman can perceive ...

In the great book of shadows

that have regained their angel wings ,

I seek your lingering echo ...

Birds fly across a tearful flemish sky ,

heralding your departure .

I'll be late for our meeting ...

time always clothes our thoughts

in fragments of the past .

With a surreal touch of amnesia...

Comments +

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) August 23rd, 2026 11:27
lovely flow to this piece
- LorenzAugust 23rd, 2026 11:32
  Painting of a mental landscape ...
Ellen Marsell August 23rd, 2026 11:54
Memory is a constant artistic transformation of the past.
A very delicate, melancholic, and surreal poem about memory.
- LorenzAugust 23rd, 2026 11:57
  with a light touch of amnesia on the canvas ...

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I hold you in thought