Is that how it goes?
don’t forget vacationing
hard work should pay off
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Very appropriate for many of us working class. Thanks!
Yeah maybe cause I’m the working class
I read this as I just got back from vacation! ☺️
Where’d you go?
Montauk, Long Island
Nice
People feel that if they work hard enough they are owed a vacation, interesting point of view.
Demar, this gave me a smile! That playful opening leads into a gentle reminder about balance...accomplishment means little if we never pause long enough to enjoy what we’ve built. Great little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you brother, time management on all levels…
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