OLD MEN

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Old men gather
At cemetary gates
To say goodbye
To an old mate
The years have passed
The glory days gone
The crematorium
Bathed in sun.

In aging eyes
And whitened hair
To pay respect
To show they care
But each deep in
The beating heart
They must know
Its just the start.

One by one
They will fall
Another visit
To meet the call
The only question
Left to ask
Is who is next
For death to catch ?

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  • Paul Bell

    Sure is the deadpool incorporated.
    Wonder if those vitamin pills will give me another week.

  • Classicmister

    Yery poignant words for another old man - It used to be 4 weddings and a funeral and now it's 4 funerals and a wedding!!

  • sorenbarrett

    Clever wording in this poem. We all stand in line but never know when our number will be called. Well written.

  • arqios

    And in so doing anticipate their turn at the queueπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

  • orchidee

    We're wittering our lives away waiting for that bus! lol.

  • Lorenz

    I'll keep posting poems from the realm of ectoplasms...

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, this hit me hard. Every farewell among lifelong friends carries the awareness that the circle is becoming smaller...and another person’s passing forces each survivor to confront their own mortality. Stark, honest, and powerful, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

  • Doggerel Dave

    I detest funerals. I decline to attend.I suppose I shall be forced to attend one shortly, my upright refusal no longer valid..

  • NafisaSB

    who indeed? one never knows, and always lives as if he/she is going to be a 100- and I pray all in this group reach that golden age with all senses fully intact..

  • cully45

    Sad statement of life but so true. Well put together. Regards Owen

  • turningpoint

    sad but true



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