Closed door

sorenbarrett

It's been so long since I've seen you
I came from far to visit too
I knock but you're not home
So I'll wait until the gloam

 

No sign of your returning
A candle left still burning
Your name remains on your door
But you don't live here anymore

 

Your flowers wilted
A grieving visitor jilted

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  • delusions

    Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.

  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    good write my friend



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