No pill can bring back the love that fades
No pill can change the paths we made
No pill can save me from my brain
No pill can fill or delete any peace or pain
Poetry is not just words for an outlet that's written away
Every symbol is a frequency to just breathe again
Hidden in the rhythm of all the loss and gain
Resentment sits heavy when forgiveness can't flow
Blame becomes the dam of the stagnation to let go
Ripples to Waves of cause and effect have no schedule to be kept
Chaos is random and random is what everything is, in patterns of fractals that can be easily missed.
I'll keep looking the through the mystic and not in a pill
Journey of life has its tolls and that can be part of your soul.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I write so much every day and this one just hit! Deeper I go to echo from what's left of my soul! Appreciate all your time
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Comments4
A lovely poem with deep meaning some metaphoric and some literal. Well composed Dan and a fave
Always appreciated my friend
I really enjoyed this write Dan. Great stuff 👏
- Syd 🍄
Really appreciated my friend
Dan, this really spoke to me. Writing does not erase our wounds, but it gives them language and movement...turning personal struggle toward something immense and mysterious. It has carried me through places no simple remedy could reach. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Yes my friend you understand what you do well as if we don't write to free our own soul then why else write at all.
may the journey of your life take you to wherever you want to go...and have fun on the way
Hello there and the same to you appreciate your time and keep shining in being you!
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