forgive me for my foolishness!
for wanting more than I have!
have I forgiven myself?
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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There’s a damn raw little knot of guilt and desire here, and the last question is the one that matters—it turns the plea for forgiveness inward. Three lines, but there’s a whole damn struggle between wanting, regret, and self-forgiveness inside them.
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