There is no perfect time to say goodbye so this will be my last poem… thank you to those who read and enjoy my work. I’m going to hone in on my trade skills now… poetry has helped me become the man I am today. Thank you God. Thank you God’s creations… I am nothing without you…

Demar Desu

as… I live… with you… 

I find myself… more attached;

the beauty… of life… 

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  • delusions

    He has laid down his pen and taken up his trade skills. May his tools be sharp, his hands steady, and his poetic spirit rest peacefully.

    You will be missed, brother.

  • sorenbarrett

    Wishing you luck in all that you do but no need to give up on your poetry too. A rhyme from time to time would be fine.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      I second this with enthusiasm! 💯 Hope you are feeling the love here, brother. ❤️☺️

      • sorenbarrett

        Best to you

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Demar, this genuinely saddens me. It has been an honor getting to know you through your poetry, and seeing my name in your note truly touched my heart. Your presence and your voice will be missed here, my friend. I wish you tremendous success in your trade and every blessing in whatever comes next. And hoping that one day you will find room for both. I see and appreciate the great depth that is in your work. Forever the King of Concise. Please keep in touch. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • Fränz Müller

        Wishing you the very best on the next chapter!



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