Dusk Chorus

Teddy.15

 

It's time to leave the house 

so slowly I walk the short distance to the door

that takes me outside into the great world

breathing in the misty summers end 

I see two barn swallow birds bathing in the water fountain

and as one flies above my head

I can hear a slight melody

and in that moment I forget all my troubles...

 

and I'm just here

 

surrounded in the simplicity of this beautiful dusk chorus.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Beautiful Teddy nothing like a chorus of birds to brighten the spirits and take one to another place. Well penned

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dearest sorrenbarret always for your kindness and encouragement 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure Teddy

      • soheil khodaparasti

        Beautifully serene.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you it was my aim, humbled thank you so much. 🌹

          • soheil khodaparasti

            You are welcome.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Teddy, this is absolutely beautiful. Nature draws the mind away from its burdens and gently returns it to the present. Nothing is solved, yet everything becomes lighter for a moment…and sometimes that is exactly the peace we need. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much dearest Tristan, your enthusiasm of my scribbles truly warms my heart always. it's simple yet grand just as I am I hope. 🌹 💜 🤗

            • Thomas W Case

              Absolutely beautiful. The imagery is vivid and alive.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you my dear Thomas. 🌹

              • Syd

                Hi Shirley,

                There's something quite peaceful about this write. Sometimes the simplest moments in life are the best ones.

                Well written - Syd xo

                • Teddy.15

                  Yes dear Syd, and are usually the most important moments too. Thank you dear friend. 🌹

                • NafisaSB

                  wishing you many such beautiful days...take care.

                  • Teddy.15

                    You too dearest NafisaSB 🌹 ☀️

                    • NafisaSB

                      thank you, and God bless you and keep you and yours safe...

                    • Paul Bell

                      Isn't nature great and free too.
                      Sometimes our problems go away when we leave the house.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Then we ha e to return, thank you dearest Paul, I'm currently taking some time for me after some terrible losses this year, but I'll be back soon. 🌹

                        • Paul Bell

                          Onwards and upwards.

                          • Teddy.15

                            Always onwards and upwards my friend. 🌹

                          • MendedFences27

                            Terry, I found serenity in both your poem and accompanying photo. Your poem's last line encompassed the main theme beautifully. Just a big WOW! from me. - Phil A.

                            • Teddy.15

                              Your beautiful review leaves me also with a big wow, thank you dearest Phil, for your very kind words of encouragement, biggest of hugs my dear friend. 🌹



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