Who she is

peto

She is such a delight 

Keeps herself nice and tight 

It takes work to remain in such shape 

As she struts all the eyes 

Of the love hungry guys 

Drink her in like the world's finest grape 

Lovely face flowing hair

Angels fail to compare 

With the love that beams out of her soul 

Fiddle fit very kind

An articulate mind 

Settling into her womanly role

And her heart that's the gem

Not about us and them

She's a world child with all it entails 

Spreads her beauty about 

To a  world screaming out 

For compassion to pierce through the veils 

So that's it who she is 

Had my moment of bliss 

When our paths crossed one glorious day 

Oh how quickly things changed 

Think our hearts were exchanged 

Thanked the stars she was guided my way 

 

 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 28th, 2026 15:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of recognition of value and gratitude in a romance. Nicely written it reads well with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done my friend

    • peto

      Many thanks soren
      I truly appreciate your time
      So much so that when I typed many thanks
      My phone predicted soren was next
      Extremely grateful

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure Peto

      • Syd

        Hi peto

        This is a lovely tribute write with plenty of warmth in it. I like how it's not just about physical beauty but kindness and compassion also. Great layout and rhyme too.

        - Syd 🍄

        • peto

          Thank you syd
          I'm truly grateful for your support
          Cheers



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