The end does not come
With the end of bleeding
It does not come
With the end of weeping
It does not come
With the end of needing.
It comes
With the end of forgiving.
You did not have the grace to be forgiven
That is the last thing you took from me.
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Author:
Jabberwocky (
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This poem requires a good deal of thought since it has turned around my definition of forgiveness and made me rethink the concept. Well done
It is a complicated poem, though I perhaps shouldn't say so myself. There are multiple interpretations playing on the concept and the ambiguity of key words like "end".
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