Life

mylastwrites

The body is old

But not defeated

The mind has slowed

But its not depleted

The eyes are blurry

But are not blind

The hair has thinned

But not completely gone

The ears still hear

But not as good

When you talk

Speak up if you could

 

The legs are wobbly

But can still walk

The voice is raspy

But can still talk

The arms are weak

But can still lift

Thoughts still come

But not as quick

The hands are hurting

But can still write

I hope that each morning

I awake from the previous night

 

 

(c) 1-23-2026

8-23-2026/RjH

 

 

  • Author: Raymond Hansell (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 29th, 2026 15:00
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
  • Users favorite of this poem: Friendship
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  • sorenbarrett

    I feel you all diminished but not yet disabled. Aging is a long process. Well done

    • mylastwrites

      Thank you. Actually I wrote this for a neighbor friend of mine. Pointing out the fact he was still very functional.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are very welcome

      • Friendship

        well done

        • mylastwrites

          Thank you for taking your time to read it. Much appreciated.



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