It felt like summer
The birds were singing
Bees were buzzing
The roses were in full bloom
He lay dead
The aroma of freshly baked cakes filled the room
The steak knife had broken while going through his chest
He would have a guarantee for that knife, she thought
Him being so efficient
She decided he should be in bed
But the blanket looked silly sitting on top of the knife
A nice hole in the blanket sorted that
Then she realised she could have just put him on his side
I could have put you on your side, darling
He didn’t answer
That was another one of her pet hates, being ignored
I suppose I’ll be making dinner then
You’ll be wanting your steak well done
A bit like yourself
Well done
It felt like summer
The birds were singing
Bees were buzzing
The roses were in full bloom
He lay six feet under them..
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Author:
Paul Bell (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 30th, 2026 05:06
- Category: Gothic
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Comments1
This could be read as a metaphor for relationships that rot and spoil from the inside while the outside may still look idyllic. Perhaps even stretching to “full bloom” being a satirical inversion of this internal ruination. 🙏🏻🕊️
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