Bluebirds

Kaz

Ochre sunrise dawns 

Bluebirds' wings open softly 

shimmering freedom 

 

 

 

  • Author: Kaz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 30th, 2026 18:12
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 10
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  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful image and a great metaphor as well. Nicely done

    • Kaz

      Thank you 😊 💓

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • soheil khodaparasti

        Beautifully evocative: a gentle sense of awakening and release.

        • Kaz

          Thank you lots for feedback 😊

          • soheil khodaparasti

            You are welcome.



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