the flowers die
and I lie
awake and still
and waiting still.
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Comments3
A great usage of imagery to convey the passing of time "the flowers die" very nicely done.
Hayleigh, this is so spare and aching. There is a loneliness here that does not need many words...it just sits in the room with you. Beautiful piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
Well said!
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