Just a quick glance over

Butter

Just a distant blue dot, to close to the sun.  
their is of no point to look farther into it. 
it would merely be a wast of time.   


you sure?  
I mean that it is covered in water. 
We could just pass by and take a quick glance.

Ha, having a look,   
it is way to hot, and the gravity is to low.   

I know I know.   
but it could still be interesting. 
it would aid in many other aspects.

(They did disused go past the planet)

  • Author: Butter :3 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2026 23:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Day 14. Also not as much of a poem but I need to keep myself writing .
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Such an insignificant spot in a wide universe why would anyone be interested even if they did notice it. Nicely done

    • Butter

      Thanks

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Butter, this has a fun little cosmic curiosity to it. I like the way the whole thing feels almost casual, like stumbling across a planet and deciding it might be worth a closer look after all. Nice piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Butter

          :3



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