Beloved

rrodriguez

Beloved

I 

In these verses that I write

I want you to find your dream

in this pale‑blue, pensive sky

as you gaze, thinking.

 

II 

Feeling each moment draw near,

swift as gold forming from the sunset;

hearing the stubborn whining engine cry

while you fly through the heat of the month.

 

III 

And you will think: What a promising year.

How much sun on the plains. And perhaps,

when you sigh and gently close your eyes…

only your dream remains.

  • Author: rrodriguez (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 5th, 2026 10:30
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most beautiful poem of which the last two lines "when you sigh and gently close your eyes…only your dream remains." struck me and took my thoughts to another place of reflection. How poignant they are and what power they contain. Whether you believe in an afterlife or not they hold the same force. So peaceful and majestic. Simply lovely my friend and a fave

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them. Thank you for taking the time to read what I wrote.

      • sorenbarrett

        It is always a pleasure my friend

      • rrodriguez

        I wrote this poem five years ago while I was working as a flight attendant. I found it in my list of poems and I edited it.



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