This isn’t a poem (NOT 15)

Butter

The brown and orange sky 

holds its breath as the sun retreats

(can u guess the song my friend,)

  • Author: Butter :3 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 6th, 2026 00:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: This isn’t a poem by me I REPEAT THIS ISNT FROM ME I’m just curious about whom can guess the song . I’m not in the mood to write and this feels like an interesting experiment.
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  • sorenbarrett

    Interesting that we both wrote on music and artists today. I would guess Nat King Cole "orange colored sky"

    • Butter

      No- this is not the song in which this is form. Though it was an excellent guess.

      • sorenbarrett

        Oh well I didn't think you would know that one

        • Butter

          I have indeed heard the song. The one I have pulled form is of a very different genre.

        • Norman Flagtea

          Bad Religion ?

          • Butter

            Yes!!!!! :3
            But which song?

          • Norman Flagtea

            Tiny voices.
            But I must confess that the internet helped...

            • Butter

              That’s all good :3
              Idk I always feel like that line-
              Feels strange :3



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