The Wind Remembers

gray0328

 

They left, their silhouettes thinning like thread,  

fingers lingering in the space between,  

the air trembling with absence, a quiet quake.  

We waved as if unspooling a goodbye,  

as if unraveling a promise we couldn't keep.  

 

The land lies patient, open-palmed and waiting,  

its ribs jagged with the ache for seeds.  

The wind conspires, nudging weeds along  

dry paths that forget names but not voices.  

 

Who taught the wind to carry memory?  

Or rooftops to remember our shuffled feet?  

Even silence hums where we once stood,  

its song curling like smoke, shy and soft.  

 

Our hands are tired of waving at ghosts.  

Empty air greets our palms with cold weight.  

Still, the horizon bends, whispers, and waves  

back like it knows what we’ve lost,  

like it mourns the stories we couldn't finish.

  • Author: gray0328 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 6th, 2026 10:30
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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  • sorenbarrett

    Unfinished stories how sad that is but death come early for some and lack of courage to others. Well done Gray

    • gray0328

      Thank You Soren

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Gray

      • Thomas W Case

        Superb work.

        • gray0328

          Thank You Thomas

        • Friendship

          Nicely written

          • gray0328

            Thank You



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