A sacrifice of thanks to Asclepius

alan b

A cup of hemlock to his lips

Pug nosed

Mullish and barefoot

Slowly the poison rose

Paralyzing his feet 

"Crito

We owe a rooster to Asclepius"

His life

A sacrifice of thanks to Asclepius 

With the serpent-entwined staff of his queries

Removing empty words

Poisoning the minds of youth

Waking men up 

From the illness of sleep

  • Author: alan b (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2026 02:14
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  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • sorenbarrett

    Lovely and brilliant! A wonderful write of Greek history and mythology. They poisoned Socrates for what they said was poisoning the minds of men. It is "Poisoning the minds of youth
    Waking men up
    From the illness of sleep"
    That struck me as a most beautiful line. Loved it a definite fave.

  • alan b

    Thanks. I was trying to explain the last words of socrates as a expression that his life was dedicated to healing others, and his death a sacrifice for that important work

  • arqios

    In doing so they robbed us of projects and feats he would yet accomplish.

  • Friendship

    Nicely written



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