Thank heavens
I got a sun
In my thumbs
Take them to meet
The little watery ones
Hanging out-
-er edge of my galactic
Hands on deck
Give them a head
Of steam the red stream
Was sluggish
The liquid had gotten
Muddied
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thanks to Varun Bharat for the inspiration.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments3
This one I think I got muddled it has a fun and bright feel. It is friendly and full of brightness and has an oh well feel even to the end where it got muddied. I pictured a drink in hand. Well done
Thanks for dropping by, Soren!
You are very welcome
the whole world in our hands 👍🏻🕊️
Precisely!
Fantastic poem, Mutley Ravishes! You fuse cosmic imagery, bodily motion, and mischievous wordplay into one strange little universe. I love when a poem trusts its own logic this completely...really inventive work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
It was all down to Varun! Thanks for dropping by, Tristan.
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