The Immortal

beano

Beneath the city is a city
That I see in my dreams:
A vast palace of gold and stone.
Bright‑eyed ghosts move through it
And whisper the secrets of time.
They show me a glimpse from a book
Older than silence, written by the gods,
Their eyes dimmed with sadness
Because I will never know them.

  • Author: beano (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2026 11:37
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  • Users favorite of this poem: turningpoint, sorenbarrett
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  • turningpoint

    very welll said rspecially the verbs

  • sorenbarrett

    An image of surreal ghosts and darkness. Well done



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