public and private lives

turningpoint

we are part of society 

but have very private lives family close friends

time in our rooms alone walkng inthe park  i did alot with my girlfriend

we were together everyday all day for about forty years

even in this halfway house for mentally and physically ill

people are in their rooms most of the time

probably reading  listening to music or watching t.v,

  • Author: turningpoint (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 8th, 2026 11:53
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  • Paul Bell

    I suppose we do spend most our lives in our houses, though I hate indoors.
    You say you spent 40 years with your girlfriend everyday which either brings you closer or you need another room for your own space.

  • Jamiano

    Thank you for sharing. Beautiful heartfelt poem.

  • sorenbarrett

    A long time to spend in a halfway house and with a girl friend just a long time. Well said



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