Slut

amethyste

It is easy to enter through me

I am cheap

All I want is a poem

My suns shine

And I become yours

 

 

I am that dog in the street

Easily corrupted

Give me a portion of a poem

And I am your slut.

 
 
 
 
 
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  • sorenbarrett

    Now there is an addiction. Well done

    • amethyste

      Yes. 🙂 Thank you.

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome

      • Dog days

        Quite a nice poem but I didn't really get why you said all I want is a poem

        • amethyste

          It is a metaphoical way to say I like poems.

        • Paul Bell

          I like this, it conjurs up a lot of different thoughts, a bit of erotica, a bit of wanting, a bit of, I don't give a shit.
          The line, My suns shine. Should that be. My sins shine. Great poem.

          • amethyste

            Thank you.a lot.

          • MendedFences27

            We all experience the want for a poem. Sometimes they come to us like a "Slut" to a rendezvous, and at other times it's like dragging an elephant through the desert. Your poem describes this desire perfectly. I'm not sure of your choice of words, but they define the desire eloquently. Loved your poem. - Phil A

            • amethyste

              Thank you Phil. 🙂

            • Kevin Hulme

              Yes . Like this very much.

              • amethyste

                Thank you Kevin. 🙂

                • Kevin Hulme

                  My Pleasure.

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  My friend, this is wonderfully bold and self-aware. The speaker’s hunger for poetry becomes physical, instinctive, and gloriously indiscriminate...a wicked little confession of complete devotion to the art. Outstanding write. 📜🖤🔥🙏

                  • amethyste

                    Thank you. I appreciate your words.

                  • NafisaSB

                    Gives one food for thought- hope no need to stress that much just for a poem

                    • amethyste

                      I like it when I write poems.



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