There are a Couple of days that I find very grey,
I'd sleep right through if I had my way.
The first is a Sunday for it makes me Sad;
A Melancholic Tsunami being the feelings had.
And the day before that is a Sadder day.
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Author:
Kevin Hulme (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 10th, 2026 16:01
- Category: Humor
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Comments3
Clever Kevin I loved it. Word play is always a favorite of mine. Good one
Thank you.
You are very welcome
Haha, you got me good with this one, Kevin! I followed the misery right into that final turn...and then the title clicked. Clever, concise, and damn funny. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you. For Reading and the fave. 👍
There’s a damn compact little descent into melancholy here, with “melancholic tsunami” giving the speaker’s Sunday sadness a wonderfully oversized, almost comic force. The final “Sadder day” is a neat little hook—it leaves you wanting to know what the hell happened on Saturday to make Sunday look like the better of the two.
Yes. Thank you for Reading this. 👍
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