I like you better
In the moonlight
When your silhouette is cast
In the ethereal and eternal light
If the moon above.
Ethereal and eternal
As my love for you.
I like you better
In a field if flowers
Where i can look
At natures beauty
And still i will choose
The prettiest flower
Of them all.
I like you better
At the beach
When people mistake you
For a siren
Hypnotising me
So i stay under your spell.
I like you better
When in stuck with you
Not a single other soul in sight
Just you at the center
If my universe
My everything.
No one else exists
Just us.
I like you better
When in drowning
In a sea made of you
Ethereal and eternal
As my love for you.
Even if the last thing i see
Is your hand pushing me deeper
And deeper
Into oblivion.
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Author:
StormInAteacup13 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This ones a love poem. At first. Its slowly realising your in a toxic relationship but still you stay because you've grown dependent on their siren call keeping you under their spell. And because they're the inly person you really talk to because they're isolating you without you realising it. And so on, and yet you still stay because they hold all the power over you, even as they push you deeper and deeper into the ocean. Hope you love it! (Also side note what is my obsession with imagery if drowning and water lately. All my poems on here so far include it in some way.)
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Comments1
One you love poetically stated. Nicely done.
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