What was that
I didn't hear dear
It wasn't clear
As you were walking away
We really should hold hands dear
If we have something to say.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
Cute and fun it sends a message of communication in relationships but sometimes one is so comfortable with another that no words are needed. Well done
I relate completely. While I understand that the 'dear' signifies a relationship, I believe the complaint more generalisable than that.
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a reminder that understanding requires presence, connection, and the willingness to remain near. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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