The realization of me

Caveman

I am but a meager fish in this world, a sardine lost at sea. For a long time I’ve looked, my own search party for me.

Everything was so loud, so wrong for so long. It finally got quiet in the realization of me. I was never lost or drifting away. I was actively swimming, consciously fleeing upstream.

Bonded to hardships by my own hand, caught in a net thrown by me. 

Today I swim freely with that net trailing behind, forever stuck with me. 

  • Author: Caveman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2026 08:00
  • Category: Reflection
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  • sorenbarrett

    A fish story, a catch, nicely told this poem speaks of freeing oneself from one's own net. Nicely done

    • Caveman

      Thank you, this is the first one I’ve really sat down and wrote in a long time. It awoke a passion I’d had long ago. Your comment is much appreciated.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are very welcome



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