How quaint the solitude pretends to be,
A peice of dawn with decency.
The quiet noise wills the world,
To come undone, come unfurled.
How soft the early breeze, as love so fleet,
Apon the hearts that lovers beat.
First theres one then theres two.
Then the words "I love you".
These three words forever flow,
Through oceans, streets in darkness and shadow.
Gentle of tongue, on hearts their rung.
I love you.
I love you
I love you
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A poem of the simple three words I love you. Nicely done
Ya been done a few times. Havnt been writing much. Loss of inspiration unfortunately. AI aint doing nothin but outwriting people like us these days. I guess im losing interest. I read a couple of yours lately. Still really liked it.
Thanks so much for the read and comment it is most appreciated. Don't let AI win keep writing.
There really is some amazing AI stuff on Youtube now. I think they use a recording of Billie Eillish for some jazz poetry. Blows my mind. Every 3rd or 4rth word rhymes sometimes and it can take you away.
Beautiful sentiments of companionship and serenity. Thank you.
Glad u liked it. Thanks for reading.
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