Don't forget your shine

Poetic Dan

I'm doing my best and although my troubles are being laid to rest! there will always be another test.

May my words and others continue to illuminate my path, as our souls drift in the rhythm synchronised by the fractals of the heart.

Giving more food for thought in balancing the gut to remember who we are! A unique individual shining bright than a star

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2026 00:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Each day is new and so I my rhyme to remember I hold the key to me life. Always appreciate your time, keep up the write and don't forget your shine.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Friendship
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of illumination and reflection on individuality and potential of each individual. Nicely written

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you sir! I only hope it will help me keep the light I am struggling to hold onto at the moment.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are welcome and I will wish you good luck with that

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Dan, what a hopeful and grounding piece. You recognize the continuing difficulties of life while affirming the inner strength, wisdom, and creativity that help us meet them. Keep up the write yourself, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Poetic Dan

          I know it's in me but the way we have to drag ourselves through life is starting to take it's toll and I'll be honest with you my friend, my spirit to write is strong but my body is singing a different song! As the line about guts is my battle with IBS.
          Thank you always!

        • Friendship

          Nicely written

          • Poetic Dan

            Appreciate your time. Thank you



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