2. Control

poetic.jr

That warmth

    fighting,

    drawing,

                  Lighting a way towards,

        a moment.

             A time where control,

                was nonexistent

    Where emotions,

           just existed

       Where life was not

              equal to death

                         My mind ravaged by feelings,

                            like a village after war;

                                not knowing whether to...

                Breathe.

          I'm caught between,

              control by fear

        and

           the loss of it.

  • Author: JRPoetic (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2026 08:11
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 4
  • In collections: Feeling.
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  • sorenbarrett

    Fear a powerful motivator. You have penned it well to express the emotion. Well done

  • Friendship

    nicely done



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