After ferien

isa kemmy

Loud laughter

banging chatters

lousy mumblings

all points a thing

hatred on 1st days

 

​chatters of urlaub

lots of murmer

remind me

the hate of

First day after ferien

 

​Every class

repeats sequence,

all leads to or

leading to one root

the past

the urlaub moment

 

​Loud laughter

new faces again

or old

Maybe I forgot them

But in all

I hate 1st days.

 

Loud noisy chatter

Hyena laughters

Chaos

Repeated questions

Ankommen

Makes me puke

 

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Comments5

  • sorenbarrett

    Here local customs and words for days make it difficult for me to understand but I get the feel. Nicely done

    • isa kemmy

      Urlaub means vacation
      Ferien means school break
      Ankommen means coming back
      I used some german words

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks for the information my German never good has fallen to almost nothing due to disuse for fifty five years.

      • Fränz Müller

        First days are the worst days!

        • isa kemmy

          Thats true ,everyone is loud and sometimes i hope people could just not ask lots of questions,some people come back either they had heartbreak during the vacation pr they found love

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Isa, this captures the misery of returning after a break so vividly. The sudden noise, social demands, and crowded energy make the entire day feel like an assault. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Neville



          I struggled at first .. but now I get it and share that first day aversion .. Bravo, mein Freund .. Neville 😎🌻👍

          • isa kemmy

            Thanks,danke tausendmal

          • Thomas W Case

            Excellent



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