Snowflakes in Summer

gray0328

 

It’s funny how we ink the future,  

on calendars that crumble like dry leaves  

before the day's breath touches them.  

How we sketch blueprints  

with hands shaking from uncertainties,  

believing we control the tides

when even the moon laughs at our confidence.  

 

I once knew a girl  

who planned her wedding  

before her first kiss.  

She's divorced now,  

wearing her dreams like old sneakers,  

too scuffed to be proud of,  

too familiar to throw away.  

 

I used to map my tomorrows  

across star charts and sticky notes,  

only to find today  

peering through the window,  

a guest waiting for tea,  

while I fumbled with doors unopened,  

keys unturned, surprises unwrapped.  

 

Plans are snowflakes in summer:  

beautiful ideas,  

melting before they land.

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Comments5

  • sorenbarrett

    What a poignant and most beautiful poem Gray sad but beautiful and with such great metaphors a definite fave

    • gray0328

      Thank You Soren

      • sorenbarrett

        A pleasure

      • Paul Bell

        Yes, how many have wrote down their future, walked out the door and got killed by a bus.
        Hindsight, if only we had it in spades.

        • gray0328

          Thank You Paul for sharing your feedback I appreciate it

        • Friendship

          Well written

          • gray0328

            Thank You lovely lady

          • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

            a beautiful write friend and a fav

          • NafisaSB

            Once we realize that we are puppets in the hands of fate we can still make blueprints for the future but stay aware that things may or may not go as we desire 🤔
            A good write 👌

            • gray0328

              Thank you Nafisa for sharing your feedback and support



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